Comma splices occur when two independent clauses are incorrectly joined with a comma. In other words, the words on each side of the comma could form their own sentence.
There are several ways to correct comma splices.
- One of the easiest ways to correct comma splices is to create two separate sentences.
- Comma Splice
- The council's plans will never be carried out, there is too much opposition.
- Corrected with a period
- The council's plans will never be carried out. There is too much opposition.
- Comma Splice
- Usually, a comma indicates a brief pause. However, a comma is not strong enough to provide the strong separation between two independent clauses. A semicolon can correct a comma splice if the two independent clauses are related.
- Comma Splice
- As the teacher prepared for the lesson, she wrote on the chalkboard and turned on the overhead projector, she had everything she needed to start teaching her students.
- Corrected with semicolon
- As the teacher prepared for the lesson, she wrote on the chalkboard and turned on the overhead projector; she had everything she needed to start teaching her students.
- Comma Splice
- You can also correct a comma splice by inserting a coordinating conjunction such as and, or, nor, for, or but.
- Comma Splice
- John was anxious about his date, he decided to cancel it.
- Corrected with a coordinating conjunction
- John was anxious about his date, and he decided to cancel it.
- Comma Splice
- A comma splice can be corrected by using a subordinating conjunction. Until, as long as, because, in order that, and unless are subordinating conjunctions.
- Comma Splice
- John was anxious about his date, he decided to cancel it.
- Corrected with a subordinating conjunction
- John was anxious about his date until he decided to cancel it.
- Comma Splice
The information on this page was adapted from A Writer's Reference by Diana Hacker and SF Writer by John Ruszkiewicz, Maxine Hairston, and Daniel E. Seward.
This information was compiled by Erin Fulton.